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DateWrong WordingCorrected WordingRule FollowedStrategy Followed12/15/11 (Sample)That must be taken seriously and it must also be taken into account...That must be taken seriously, and it must also be taken into account...Comma required to join two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunctionSearch for and and figure out if it is used to separate two independent clauses or not.12/18/11 (Sample)We took there money and ran.We took their money and ran.Proper use of possessive pronounSearch for there and make sure it is not referring to people.12/25/11 (Sample)When he left town he forgot his wallet.When he left town, he forgot his wallet.A sentence with an introductory element requires a comma. In this case, there is a prepositional clause. 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